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Rukaiya Siamwala's avatar

This is such a lovely prose poem. It reads so beautiful... so gently it slides within you. Love the verse on how much one carries within.

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iL.'s avatar

Thank you, Rukaiya—appreciate you reading and leaving this comment ✨🙏🏼

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Maria Sanz Esteve's avatar

Love the experiment!!!!

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iL.'s avatar

Thank you for reading, Maria :)

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Ryan Barry's avatar

This is beautifully done, brother. You've excellently synthesized two seemingly opposing forces.

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iL.'s avatar

Appreciate you, Ryan. It was a fun one to put together

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Ryan Barry's avatar

Yessir, excited for the future!

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Asia Bochenek's avatar

As always—poetry. 🤍🐚

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iL.'s avatar

Thank you, Asia. This one felt more experimental, but glad you enjoyed

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Puchi's avatar

So beautiful, I love the metaphors in this text xx

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iL.'s avatar

Thank you, Puchi <3

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